You did pretty good. I know its hard not to get the words all mixed up but i think if you looked at what this ment and really took some time with it, you could add a lot more emotion to it.
You gotsta memorize those words, homie!!!! But once you got those down and add just a tad more emotion you'll be good to go!!!
i agree with with everything above. good job!
Nice job! You seemed very natural. Just put a little more emotion into your lines as you memorize them more.
You did pretty good. I know its hard not to get the words all mixed up but i think if you looked at what this ment and really took some time with it, you could add a lot more emotion to it.
ReplyDeleteYou gotsta memorize those words, homie!!!! But once you got those down and add just a tad more emotion you'll be good to go!!!
ReplyDeletei agree with with everything above. good job!
ReplyDeleteNice job! You seemed very natural. Just put a little more emotion into your lines as you memorize them more.
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