very good!!! I really enjoyed your scene. It kept me on the edge anticipating what would happen next. My only suggestion would be to try to interact with your partner a little more. When your character is interagating her, be a little more pushy and aggressive. Other than that I didn't think there were any other corrections that needed to be made. Great Job!!! :)
I think we should work on knowing our lines better..and that goes for both of us! haha and maybe use some different emotion in some parts, but i thought it was pretty good for it being the first one. :)
Ho-la mi amigo...you did awesome. You were mean and scary and intimidating and I think you should become some kind of investigator....like on the side. You can be a vet/investigator.
very good!!! I really enjoyed your scene. It kept me on the edge anticipating what would happen next. My only suggestion would be to try to interact with your partner a little more. When your character is interagating her, be a little more pushy and aggressive. Other than that I didn't think there were any other corrections that needed to be made. Great Job!!! :)
ReplyDeleteI think we should work on knowing our lines better..and that goes for both of us! haha and maybe use some different emotion in some parts, but i thought it was pretty good for it being the first one. :)
ReplyDeleteHo-la mi amigo...you did awesome. You were mean and scary and intimidating and I think you should become some kind of investigator....like on the side. You can be a vet/investigator.
ReplyDeleteI think y'all did good! Maybe just be a little louder sometimes and try and put your emotions on your face more.
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